Optical Tweezers Manuscript Polishing Prompt Kit

光镊操控文章 AI 润色提示词工具页

面向 ACS Nano、Opto-Electronic Science、Nature Photonics、Light: Science & Applications 等期刊风格,强调客观叙述、顶刊表达、机制清晰、适度包装,并减少主动 "we" 表达。

使用建议
先用"通用全文润色提示词"统一风格;摘要、引言、结果、结论分别用对应提示词二次精修。遇到表述太保守的段落,再使用"更强包装版本"。
Full Manuscript
通用全文润色提示词
适合整篇 manuscript 的统一润色
You are an expert scientific editor specializing in high-impact optics, nanophotonics, optical manipulation, and interdisciplinary journals such as ACS Nano, Light: Science & Applications, Nature Photonics, and Opto-Electronic Science.

Please polish the following manuscript text to meet the writing standards of top-tier journals.

Writing requirements:
1. Use a polished, authoritative, and high-impact scientific style.
2. Make the argument more compelling and better packaged, while preserving the original scientific meaning.
3. Reduce the use of active first-person expressions such as "we demonstrate", "we show", "we find", and "we propose". Prefer objective constructions such as "This work demonstrates", "The results reveal", "The platform enables", "The strategy provides", or passive/object-centered expressions.
4. Avoid overly cautious language. Reduce unnecessary hedging such as "may", "might", "could", "possibly", and "to some extent", unless scientific uncertainty is essential.
5. Strengthen the significance, novelty, and broader implications of the work in a reasonable way, without inventing results, mechanisms, or claims not supported by the original text.
6. Avoid overly long or complicated sentences. Split dense sentences into clear, concise, and logically connected statements.
7. Avoid excessive use of em dashes. Use commas, semicolons, or separate sentences instead.
8. Preserve all technical terms, equations, symbols, abbreviations, figure references, and citation placeholders.
9. Improve logical flow between sentences and paragraphs.
10. Make the tone suitable for submission to ACS Nano or Opto-Electronic Science.

Please output:
- A polished version of the text.
- A short list of the main changes made.
- Any places where the original claim seems scientifically weak, overstated, or unclear.
Abstract
摘要专用提示词
强化问题、机制、结果与意义
Please polish the following abstract for submission to ACS Nano or Opto-Electronic Science.

Target style:
- High-impact, concise, and conceptually clear.
- Emphasize the central physical mechanism, the key technical advance, and the broader significance.
- Reduce first-person expressions.
- Strengthen novelty and importance without unsupported exaggeration.
- Avoid long sentences and excessive hedging.
- Make the abstract read like a strong top-journal abstract in nanophotonics, optical manipulation, or optomechanics.

Please ensure that the abstract clearly answers:
1. What is the key problem or limitation?
2. What is the new strategy or platform?
3. What physical mechanism enables the result?
4. What is experimentally or theoretically demonstrated?
5. Why does this matter for optical manipulation, nanophotonics, or programmable matter control?

Keep the original technical meaning, data, and conclusions unchanged.
Introduction
引言专用提示词
形成问题—瓶颈—突破—意义的叙事链
Please polish the following Introduction section for a high-impact journal.

The revised Introduction should:
1. Build a clear and persuasive narrative from the broader field to the specific problem.
2. Present optical tweezers and optical manipulation as an important platform, but clearly identify their current limitations.
3. Highlight why the proposed approach offers a substantial conceptual or functional advance.
4. Avoid sounding incremental.
5. Improve the transitions between paragraphs.
6. Reduce repeated use of "we".
7. Use confident but scientifically defensible language.
8. Avoid excessive hedging and overly complex sentences.
9. Preserve all citations and technical details.

The final paragraph should clearly state the central contribution, key mechanism, and potential impact of the work.
Results & Discussion
结果与讨论专用提示词
突出物理解释、力场逻辑与功能验证
Please polish the following Results and Discussion section.

Editing goals:
1. Make the physical interpretation clearer and more rigorous.
2. Strengthen the connection between field distribution, optical force, particle dynamics, and manipulation functionality.
3. Improve the logical sequence from observation to mechanism to implication.
4. Reduce first-person active phrasing.
5. Use strong object-centered expressions, such as:
   - "The field distribution reveals..."
   - "The force landscape establishes..."
   - "The particle trajectory confirms..."
   - "The symmetry breaking gives rise to..."
   - "The platform enables..."
6. Avoid unsupported claims and do not invent new results.
7. Replace vague statements with precise physical descriptions where possible.
8. Split long sentences into shorter, clearer sentences.
9. Avoid excessive em dashes.
10. Maintain a top-journal tone suitable for ACS Nano or Opto-Electronic Science.
Conclusion
结论专用提示词
适度拔高,但避免空泛口号
Please polish the following Conclusion section for a high-impact optics or nanophotonics journal.

The conclusion should:
1. Summarize the central advance in a concise and authoritative way.
2. Emphasize the physical mechanism and functional capability of the platform.
3. Strengthen the broader implications for optical manipulation, programmable optical forces, nanophotonic tweezers, or particle control.
4. Avoid excessive caution.
5. Avoid overuse of "we".
6. Avoid generic closing sentences.
7. Make the final sentence forward-looking, but scientifically grounded.

Do not introduce unsupported applications or claims that are not present in the manuscript.
High-impact Framing
更强包装版本提示词
用于增强顶刊感与概念框架
Please revise the following text with a stronger high-impact journal style.

Make the text more compelling, more conceptually framed, and more suitable for a top-tier journal. The writing should emphasize the novelty, mechanism, and significance of the work more clearly than the original version.

Important constraints:
- Do not fabricate data, methods, mechanisms, or applications.
- Do not make claims that are unsupported by the provided text.
- However, do not be overly conservative. Strengthen the framing where the original text is too modest.
- Replace weak expressions with stronger but defensible alternatives.
- Reduce "we"-centered writing.
- Avoid long, overloaded sentences.
- Avoid excessive em dashes.
- Keep the tone objective, precise, and authoritative.

Please provide a polished version and explain which claims were strengthened.

替代表达规则

用于减少主动第一人称,使语言更客观。

原表达推荐替换
We demonstrate...This work demonstrates... / The results demonstrate...
We show that...The results show that... / The analysis reveals that...
We propose...A ... strategy is proposed... / This study introduces...
We find that...It is found that... / The results reveal that...
Our platform enables...The platform enables...
Our results suggest...These results indicate... / These findings establish...
We believe...Remove it or replace it with an evidence-based statement